Friday, August 10, 2012

New review

If you're so inclined, thanks for reading it.

I've done better. The opening section is a bit rough, I suppose because I felt I had to remove some pretty harsh stuff. Too catty. Now, stiff.
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2 comments:

  1. Memphis MOJOAugust 11, 2012 at 8:33 AM

    I imagine you walk a fine line between being honest and not being overly critical.

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  2. SpotAugust 11, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    Mojo - This new column is a bit different than my other one. The editor for this one come from a journalism background and therefore prefers a balanced approach. The other guy, beside being a worse proofreader, is all about stirring the pot. In that I can be taciturn, that fine line you mention does tend to get blurred no matter how many qualifiers I cram into a sentence.

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